Thursday, November 8, 2012

Personal Narrative by Olivia Hoerl

   One afternoon I was alone at home with my older sister Emily. My dad was taking my little sister Adi to swimming lessons. When Emily and I were at home I got a little worried about how it would be and then someone banged on the door. Emily and I ducked behind the couch so they wouldn't see us. I said, "Why would those people be here?" You will never believe how I became so scared! My sister and I were upstairs playing Wii and I wanted to shut all the blinds.
     I asked Emily,"When is dad and Adi going to be here?"  But Em did'nt answer me. We went downstairs to the livingroom and decided to turn on thh TV. I wanted to go back upstairs but Em said,"Lets just stay down here."
     Finally my dad and Adi got home after an hour of us being alone. When I saw them walk in I was so glad they were home! After all  things turned out normal . I said to dad " I never want to be home alone with my sister again!                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    

1 comment:

  1. Nice job Olivia Mrs.Mueller you should do more of these with the kids!!!

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Hello! I am a third grade teacher at Chilton Elementary School. I have been teaching in Chilton for 16 years. I hope you find this blog useful and engaging! You can reach me at 849-9388 or muellerj@chilton.k12.wi.us